Here’s a snippet from ‘Corporals’, my current work in progress:
‘You good, babe?’ Karma shifted her sub machine gun to her shoulder. The white karat in her vision field swept along with the weapon’s point of aim as she moved down the corridor. Sounds reached her from an open office door on her left. ‘You know what they did to me.’ Shifting to the door, Karma breathed and listened. Three men talking, voices low. She moved through the door. The job was to rescue the kids and grab anyone they could for the cops and Rangers to get intel out of. That meant Burn should have been on the move, not her. But Burn wouldn’t put paid to these bastards. ‘This is a job. Stay focused.’ Stepping in the room, the three men turned to her, their conversation stopping. Her sub machine gun coughed three rounds. Three men collapsed back in their chairs, neat holes in their heads. Karma considered her options. Working solo, she didn’t have time to check for any data or documents. Finding the other kids was her priority. Turning, she moved out of the room and back down the hall. ‘I’m focused.’
I’m looking forward to this whole story getting out to the world.
Getting out to Roberts Creek for a little fishing and fun in my new kayak.
So, I bought a kayak, and went on a little adventure. Not that I haven’t had a few adventures in my life, between serving in the Army, getting into trail running and ultra marathons, and even doing a couple of Ironman Triathlons.
There are a few reasons I keep seeking out adventure and ways to both test and enjoy myself.
One, it helps keep me in shape, healthy and happy.
Two, I get to mentally recharge for all the day job, family and real world stresses that impact my life. We all have those things, and we all need to get away to refresh.
Three, it does help my writing. My characters do crazy, dangerous things. While I can’t recommend hiring out as mercenary to do a crazy low jump and then kidnap a general, or break into an apartment to steal some high tech item and then rappel down the building to escape (both events I’ve writing in stories), getting out for some kayaking, hiking, camping, fishing or long bike rides all give me a place to test myself to adapt to conditions and to see how my characters would respond to challenges.
Fourth, it’s fun.
So get out in the world and do something adventurous. Then come back and tell your story!
Working on edits, rough drafts, and story selection while on a day job work trip.
Well, as I said last week, I’ve got stories in for two anthologies. And I had a work trip to Virginia Beach last week. Yeah, I know, of all the places I could have to go, there are many worse places. I’m familiar with quite a few of those worse places.
So, I’m working on what will be the 6th novel in the Burn and Bad Karma Series. The 5th is currently in edits, but to give you an idea, Bad Karma goes to Chicago with no adult supervision. In the 6th book, we’ll see how she handles things getting home when Burn’s in a bit of trouble. The next story involves them stealing a yacht back from some criminal.
Thus far on the anthologies, I’ve selected two stories for Tales of the E4 Mafia 2. Hopefully, I’ll get through the rest that I’ve received this and next week.
Terri’s birthday’s coming up, so we’ll take a weekend out to enjoy a new area we’ve been meaning to check out. From what the hotel says, there’s beer and whiskey, so we’ll be fine!
I hope you’re all doing well! Let me know how you’re doing!
Well, with the deadline for the anthologies I’m working on with Henchman Press being tomorrow, I’ll be starting in on story selection and sending out editorial notes for the stories I have. And I do have quite a few stories to work through.
On the up side, I’ll be on a work trip this week, so I’m on my own in the evenings. I should be able to get some significant progress on the story selection piece. On the down side, we don’t know how much work we’ll have to do on the day job. Hopefully, things will go well and the project will run smoothly.
So if you’ve submitted, you can expect to hear something soon. If you’re behind schedule, email me at keith@keithhedger.com and let me know what’s going on.
Wish me luck on getting these stories read. One of the coolest parts of this process is getting to see all these stories first, before anyone else does!
Hopefully, I’ll be able to post some great updates over the next few weeks!
One of the things that’s always fun for me is when things come together in stories based on a comment or piece of information that occurs when I’m writing.
I have nine long novels for the Burn and Bad Karma series sketched out. And, while I’m definitely a discovery writer, I generally know the outcomes for certain characters, major events that will happen, and plot items that need to occur.
As I’m writing the fifth of those novels, I’ve had a couple of things come up that are literally changing what I had in mind. In one case, a character will experience a development arc where they shift their loyalty. Another is that a major bad character will not be killed by the character I had originally planned to kill them (and the antagonist in question will survive at least one additional novel).
So, if you decide to take up writing, expect things like this to happen. Some times your characters will do things you didn’t expect. Some times whole plot lines will change.
Like many writers, I get asked how I keep coming up with ideas. The truth is that I have a lot of ideas. I don’t have enough time to write all the stories those ideas are connected with, but I do have a lot of ideas for stories. And sometimes, some event or comment or action I see gives me an idea for a story.
What I do with this ideas is make a note of them. So, it gets jotted down in a notebook, or texted to myself, or added to a page in my Notion pages. In some way, shape or manner, I document that idea.
If the idea is good, it will be there when I have time to develop it. If it’s great, I build a lot more base for it, so I can act on it when there’s time and not a dozen other deadlines and projects going. Some, sadly, go to the great note page in the sky.
One other interesting idea happens with a few of those idea, though. A rare few show up when I’m working on a story, and they fit. Not usually in the scene I’m writing, but somewhere in the story. So, I work it in.
That’s where Pheobe the Tank came from. Someone else had made a comment about sentient tank stories and I was working on Sandblaster at the time. Since there were already tanks in the story, it was fun to go back through and add a sentient tank to this cyberpunk mercenary story.
From there, I was invited to submit to the Worldbreaker anthology. Which lead to Amarillo by Fire Fight, where Phoebe the Tank catfishing an infantry soldier while in a rolling tank fight.
So, there you have it. Most of the writers I know don’t have a lack of ideas. We really don’t. We have capacity to work on one or two stories at a time, and not nearly enough hours in a day to write everything we want to, but we generally don’t seem to lack ideas.
Thanks for reading through this. I hope you enjoyed a glimpse into my process!
I finished the rough draft of ‘Corporals’ the other day, and thought you all might enjoy a snippet of the story. In this story, Burn and Bad Karma are recruited into Rangers due to some issues that come up with Karma’s past.
Enjoy!
“Training under an identity we’re building for you. Makes it more complicated for politicians. Tossing people with no numbers under tank treads is easy. Soldiers and Department team members get ugly for them fast,” the sergeant major explained.
“We haven’t been a country long enough for politicians to be voted out,” Burn faced the soldier.
“Three politicians had tragic accidents,” the general noted, “And the investigations came up to purely accidental causes. Clearly.”
“Wasn’t me,” Bad Karma said.
“It wasn’t,” the sergeant major smiled, her cheeks rising as she spoke, “We checked.”
“What, exactly, are you trying to say?” Burn’s fingers pressed against the table, turning white.
“That it appears that trying to use the Ranger Department for political advantage can be detrimental to one’s health. Many veterans of the war are outspoken about using individuals as trading chips. The Department, of course, is absolutely loyal to the elected leaders of our nation and our constitution,” the sergeant major said.
Silence settled across the room. Burn noted the buzz of the white noise generator and that her comm systems were showing no signal.
“It appears we can trust you. So, why HALO jumping?”
“It’s the nearest start date we have for any training,” the general shrugged, “And I doubt you two would do well in Ranger School.”
“Why’s that?” Bad Karma asked.
“Ranger School lasts for three months. Freefall school is three weeks, and you don’t have to go in knowing military tactics,” the sergeant major noted, “First, you don’t want to be out of the loop in the dropped numbers world for three months. Second, you don’t need to go through the usual military training program. We just need you in a school to have your new core IDs solid. Third, the training will be useful to you and to us, as it opens some options when situations needing your skills come up.”
For those who don’t know me, or only know me from my fiction, I thought I’d introduce myself and let you know a bit more about me and my life, both in writing and outside of it.
First, I’ve been married for almost three decades to a wonderful woman named Terri, who puts up with my writing, day job, fitness and workouts and shares my love of adventure, enjoying food and finding new things. I’ve also got a daughter and three amazing grandkids who live near enough to us that we get to share a lot of fun, life and good time together.
Many years ago, after being largely sedentary after I got out of the Army, I was going through a bit of a mental mess, and that let to me getting back into fitness. At the time, it was specifically running and over time, the farther the better. It got to the point that I’ve completed 54 marathons and ultramarathons, the longest being a 100 mile race (The Long Haul 100 Miler). This led into me getting coaching and fitness training certifications which I use for my own fitness as well as helping and coaching others for their fitness. Unfortunately, I’ve got a messed up knee, so really long runs are largely off the table, but biking, swimming, lifting and other exercise forms are still in my wheel house!
As part of moving back to Iowa, I intended to get back into hunting and fishing, since I hadn’t done much of that when we lived in Georgia and didn’t make time. Now, if I’m not at a family event, a fiction event or working on a project, I’m likely to be in one of the local public hunting areas, or somewhere around Lake Red Rock hoping to catch a fish or two.
I’m also a beer and whiskey guy, which, like most things in my life has lead to me seeking out local breweries wherever I go, and learning about cocktail making techniques. I’ve now got a beer fridge with a nice variety of different beers, and I’ve put together a nice bar station to make cocktails of many varieties. Check out the recipe for the first cocktail I’ve created, the Iowa Twilight (Thanks to Green Frog Distillery for the excellent corn whiskey. I bought the glass ware from Ranger Up.)
Iowa Twilight
0.5 oz Pom juice
0.5 oz orange juice
teaspoon of simple syrup
splash of grenadine syrup
two dashes of orange bitters
2 oz of corn whiskey (4 year barrel aged Green Frog Corn Whiskey works very well)
I’m at it again. I’m doing edits and story selection for two anthologies with Henchman Press!
Tales of The E4 Mafia 2
We’re looking for more stories about those corporals, specials, lance corporals and petty officers!
Give us your best speculative fiction (science fiction, fantasy, horror, and urban fantasy) stories about those experience young soldiers, marines and sailors getting tough tasks handled, dodging overbearing leadership, show how and when to ignore their unit’s stodgy processes, and skirting the regulations and rules with the grace of a ballet dancer. A ballet dancer who happens to have access to a ridiculous amount of equipment and weaponry!
Please send your submissions to keith@keithhedger.com with a subject line of “Tales of the E4 Mafia 2”. Submissions are due by 31 March 2025. Please format your story in Times New Roman in 12 point font, and should be between 4000 and 12,000 words total.
Butterbars! Large and (Not So) In Charge
No one starts a job or career knowing everything. Junior officers, whether they’re 2nd Lieutenants or Ensigns, in any military bring some nuance to their position. They have education and are provided with training, taught to lead and make decisions in tough situation. What they don’t have is experience at their job, an understanding of how their unit operates, or the personalities and capabilities of their people. Combined with directives to make decisions, give orders and direct efforts, this can lead to, err, interesting results, to say the least.
What we’re looking are speculative fiction tales centered around these most junior officers and the situations they create or impact. We expect to see absurd outcomes, courses of action that are other than optimal, or humor as these leaders’ directives and orders create chaos, their troops adjust to avoid negative consequences, and somehow they still get the job done!
Please send your submissions to keith@keithhedger.com with a subject line of “Butter Bars!”. Submissions are due by 31 March 2025. Please format your story in Times New Roman in 12 point font, and should be between 4000 and 12,000 words total.
So, if you write military fiction, speculative fiction, or any brand of fantasy or science fiction, send me a story!
If you’re new to my writing, most of my stories is set in the world of Burn and Bad Karma. This setting is a somewhat near future version of our world, where cyberware is common, nations have been fragmented or rebuilt in new ways, and everyone is looking for a way up to the top or at least get out of the squalor of the level they’re at.
They could be a gang member looking to move up so they can quit pulling watch on their turf at the the most dangerous times or a corporate wage earner who’s looking to move up to the team lead position for the perks and the bigger paycheck, no matter who they have to step over or step on. Grunts on the front lines of militaries, police forces or corporate security offices who want to get the better gear, implants and equipment, as well as sergeant’s stripes to show the world they can lead people and get work done. Politicians and their flunkies cut deals to bring them power and position, without a thought to the consequences their moves inflict on the common people of their city, state or nation.
Now that we see that, the question is why would I write in such a setting? I mean, it can be depressing to think about all the ways people can and (in setting) do burn through those around them, toss away those below and back stab their peers and those above them in the food chain.
The truth is that I’ve been reading cyberpunk since the 1980’s and it’s milieu that intrigues. Everything in it creates conflict at every level. Trust between characters is hard earned and can be burned away with a single action. People in these stories can be driven by anything from greed to a simple need to help others, but even at their best most don’t limit their options in how to deal with a problem.
It’s fun to write characters who are both desperate and empowered. They’ve done what they had too so they could get the tech, weapons and experience to scratch their way to a better life. Back them into a corner, and they’re going to fight, and they don’t care about rules, fair play or whether their actions are far beyond the threat posed to them. And afterward, no matter how beaten or bloodied they got, they’ll stand up again to deal with the next threat.
Burn is motivated by greed, a need to prove herself, and a growing love of Bad Karma. Meanwhile, Bad Karma doesn’t count people are particularly important, but the small number that are important to her, she’ll fight all hell for. And she’ll move first, because she’s going to let them know she’s one of the best they’ll ever fight.
To be far, while I write in a cyberpunk, dystopian setting, the actual stories are pulled from other genres’. Moving Target is a thriller and tells about Bad Karma’s origin. California Chaos is a spy novel set in the fragmented cyberpunk environs of San Luis Obispo, California. Sandblaster is a military science fiction story that combines two heist stories, a mercenary team and a sentient tank. Easy Jobs is an action thriller with cyberpunk characters and an 80’s movie sensibility toward violence as a problem solving tool. And in short fiction, I’ve written a zombie story, an earth based war story, a Christmas story and even a true military science fiction story.
So the answer, really, is that the setting is fun and creates opportunities to explore many other story types in the back drop of the broken world my characters are in. Also, anywhere less dangerous would just be boring for Burn and Bad Karma 🙂
I hope you enjoy my stories! Feel free to leave a review or email me at Keith@keithhedger.com if you’d like to discuss any of this or ask questions about any of my stories!
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